Irony
Lucy hated everything about Matt. Matt was Lucy's current boyfriend for almost two years. She knew that breaking up with him was a terrible idea, but she couldn't bare the thought of being with him any longer. Matt was clingy, protective, and overbearing. It got to a point where a simple "hello" made her so mad. Lucy had already tried breaking up with Matt, but he just kept coming back. She thought to herself and wondered what the consequences would be if she would just kill him. She knew that this could be permanent solution to all her problems, but she didn't want to deal with the aftermath. So, Lucy thought about this over and over until she figured out a plan. Her plan was to make the murder scene appear to be a suicide and then maybe she wouldn't have to go to jail. Matt had asked Lucy Thursday night to come over Sunday, making it the perfect day to kill him. Sunday quickly approached and Lucy pulled into the driveway of Matt's house and slipped a gun she stole from her friend who was a cop in the back of her pants. She approached the door, knocked, and said:
"Hey babe" and kissed him on the cheek.
Matt insisted that she come in and sit down on the couch.
"How was your day today?" he said while filling up two glasses of wine from the kitchen.
Lucy got up from the couch and turned toward the kitchen. At this point she was sweating profusely. She pulled out the gun and aimed for the back of Matt's head, but missed and shot him in the leg. Matt fell to the ground, screamed in agony for three minutes and then came to a stop. Lucy thought that he was dead so she laid the gun by his chest and wrapped his left hand around the trigger grabbed her purse and began to walk out of his house. She made sure no evidence was left, but before she knew it she heard noise coming from the kitchen and turned around to see that Matt was holding the gun that shot a bullet through her chest and killed her in an instant.
I liked your use of irony when you expected that Lucy killed Matt, but he was actually alive and killed her. Good job Katie
ReplyDeleteThere was a lot of irony when Lucy tried to kill Matt, but Matt actually killed her. Great story
ReplyDeleteLOL it was so funny and ironic when Lucy tried to kill Matt, but her killed her instead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3
ReplyDeleteLOL it was so funny and ironic when Lucy tried to kill Matt, but her killed her instead!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3
ReplyDeletegreat story! Very ironic
ReplyDeleteHow ironic that Lucy tried to kill him but she really got killed by Matt. Very well-written.
ReplyDelete